After talking to my teacher we concluded that the first example was too washed out. My movie is supposed to be about color but it was this ugly tan color which didn't reflect the life of the film. I fixed it by re-editing it and this time saturating the pictures so the sunset stood out.
Next, I chose a font that looked kind of handwritten, because since she's talking like it is her diary, it fits pretty well.
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